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Soooo........


I'm back.......

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I made this piece exclusively for you guys upon returning. I hope you like it. Lol.


Read my journal I'll be posting in a few to find out wtf I've been.


BTW. What in the world is this "critique" thing.... o.0


[Kazera Emberhowl (c) Kaeyla Weeden]

Critiques


:iconwolf250:
As always, I'll start with I really like in the picture.

So, first of all: the eyes! Yellowish, the black iris is nearly not visible. It attracts my attention and it gives more fierce to the character. Very great.
Secondly: the magical fire around the right front paw. I wish I could do something like that, you gotta learn me how you do that! : D Orange and purple-ish colors was a nice choice. And you did the light reflections well. It adds a mysterious atmosphere to the picture.
And then: the idea of the pose. Trying this perspective was a good idea too. I've got to say that the front part of it is really well done, even perfect to me. The only thing I'd like to point out is the back. I would curve it a bit more... I don't know how to explain, so I add some red: [link]

But well, don't worry, this picture still looks beautiful, I also like the design and how you ink the wolf. Keep it up : )
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:iconjaole:
While I love the idea of the bi-colored flame, the shading seems a bit flat. In my opinion, the color would not just stop where it does, and would most likely extend up through the entire character, getting darker at the furthest points from the flame (Depending on the lighting from the background, of course. Though there doesn't seem to be one.) The flame itself contrasts nicely with the duller, less saturated colors of the character, and stands out nicely. I also adore the coloring on the eye, the orange really pops on that dark grey.

The perspective is a little off, and the body looks a tad longer than it should. The hind leg also looks a little wonky, it may be too short? However, the anatomy from the shoulder forward is almost perfect.

Wolves, magic/fire, piercings, red and grey are all a bit over used, hence the low score in 'originality'

Overall, the picture is quite enjoyable. I hope to see more from you.
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:iconcrazy-facade:
o3o oo shiny fire....i like....

Very awesome pic ^^
:iconpegasusj19:
I love the fire!

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:iconlvdragon:
Awesome anatomy !
Love the head :D
:iconwindwolf1575:
:wow: speechless...

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:iconwolfwind:
Omg you! I thought you had died! What have you been doing chica? I has a present for joo from Christmas lol XD

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:iconkazera-emberhowl:
LOL you have a present for me from Christmas...oh gawd. X3 Well I'm available to receive it now ROFL.

<3333333333 Kiki =] READ MAH JOURNAL 8O

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"Now, we must all fear evil men. But there is another kind of evil which we must fear most, and that is the indifference of good men." -- The Boondock Saints

The artist formerly known as Darkwulf787.
:iconkazera-emberhowl:
Thanks, been practicin'. =]

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"Now, we must all fear evil men. But there is another kind of evil which we must fear most, and that is the indifference of good men." -- The Boondock Saints

The artist formerly known as Darkwulf787.
:iconkazera-emberhowl:
Thanks! :D

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"Now, we must all fear evil men. But there is another kind of evil which we must fear most, and that is the indifference of good men." -- The Boondock Saints

The artist formerly known as Darkwulf787.
:iconkazera-emberhowl:
Lol it's shiny indeed. X3 Thanks! :)

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"Now, we must all fear evil men. But there is another kind of evil which we must fear most, and that is the indifference of good men." -- The Boondock Saints

The artist formerly known as Darkwulf787.

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